tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post4650285090887361171..comments2023-09-25T09:45:22.835-07:00Comments on A Word In Edgewise: Dumb Luck - Chapter FiveJeff Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10978944708950054312noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-26395150403460514122008-01-13T06:34:00.000-08:002008-01-13T06:34:00.000-08:00Darren just keeps leaping from the frying pan into...Darren just keeps leaping from the frying pan into the fire!Lathariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13595430762072916892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-56610795425646023512008-01-05T09:15:00.000-08:002008-01-05T09:15:00.000-08:00On to Part Six. Gotta see if he makes it out of th...On to Part Six. Gotta see if he makes it out of the service station alive. <BR/><BR/>Did he get coffee? Donuts? Xanax?Mimi Lenoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01616635898420835541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-24737677427911083742008-01-02T21:38:00.000-08:002008-01-02T21:38:00.000-08:00I was just talking to a Hollywood executive about ...I was just talking to a Hollywood executive about this story you'll be getting a call soon!RWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349292631566372999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-24611914014827565582008-01-02T12:35:00.000-08:002008-01-02T12:35:00.000-08:00one cool thing about not reading the last couple d...one cool thing about not reading the last couple days is that I don't have to wait for each new chapter...(smile)<BR/><BR/>this is really a great read Jeff!katherine.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06000676644051958330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-19194447016848317632008-01-01T15:28:00.000-08:002008-01-01T15:28:00.000-08:00Sandee- It'll be waiting for you.Odat- #6 is writt...Sandee- It'll be waiting for you.<BR/><BR/>Odat- #6 is written and now it's time to break out the keyboard.<BR/><BR/>Mel- Ya know, there are a lot of countries south of the USA.<BR/><BR/>Stay tuned, ya never know what might happen...and of course I love ya anyway!Jeff Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978944708950054312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-60148760330710254752008-01-01T15:07:00.000-08:002008-01-01T15:07:00.000-08:00:-)Gotta love me anyway?:-)<BR/><BR/>Gotta love me anyway?Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-61967344407252393712008-01-01T13:44:00.000-08:002008-01-01T13:44:00.000-08:00Nice going....I just can't wait ya know!!!!!PeaceNice going....I just can't wait ya know!!!!!<BR/><BR/>PeaceOdathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03973602431527460287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-56449596862287004442008-01-01T11:06:00.000-08:002008-01-01T11:06:00.000-08:00He's starting to really lose it. He's crumbling. ...He's starting to really lose it. He's crumbling. Very well done. I'll be here for the finale tomorrow. Great job Jeff! :)Sandeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06785788498697004273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-44928983190375815522008-01-01T10:33:00.000-08:002008-01-01T10:33:00.000-08:00Mel- Oh great, you spoiled it for everyone now!Mat...Mel- Oh great, you spoiled it for everyone now!<BR/><BR/>Matt- Note to self, Beano...isle five, top shelf.<BR/><BR/>Dana- Glad your enjoying it, thanks.<BR/><BR/>Hammer- It's been a fun story to write and the ideas seem to flow without effort. Bonus!<BR/><BR/>Kevin- I have the ending figured out. I just have to get him from where is is to where he'll be.<BR/><BR/>As to the 'neatness' of it I'd comment here, but that would spoil it wouldn't it?<BR/><BR/>Travis- Yeah, there are a lot of holes that could be filled in. Thanks for hanging in there.Jeff Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978944708950054312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-87590797604740052192008-01-01T09:45:00.000-08:002008-01-01T09:45:00.000-08:00I can see how you could expand the story to novell...I can see how you could expand the story to novella size. We could get back story on Darren and you could certainly flesh out the reasons why he panicked so quickly.<BR/><BR/>Great job!Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-37242739778643745982008-01-01T09:35:00.000-08:002008-01-01T09:35:00.000-08:00How fun! I am glad you are writing so much! Good...How fun! <BR/><BR/>I am glad you are writing so much! Good on you, dear friend!<BR/><BR/>Keep going! (And please know endings do not need to end neatly!)Kevin Weckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07759636530282958950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-72987430819022181772008-01-01T08:44:00.000-08:002008-01-01T08:44:00.000-08:00Good deal. I like this style of writing and the wa...Good deal. I like this style of writing and the way you present it.nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07550167783969561280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-55957451402545033862008-01-01T06:33:00.000-08:002008-01-01T06:33:00.000-08:00I'm secretly thrilled that you couldn't quite end ...I'm secretly thrilled that you couldn't quite end the story. Maybe we'll get equally lucky again today?Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05427053242655177097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-701326367247316832008-01-01T03:13:00.000-08:002008-01-01T03:13:00.000-08:00I hate when I have gas and can't pump it out. Che...I hate when I have gas and can't pump it out. Cheers!!Schmoophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01758200133537951854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-9225585800524576542007-12-31T20:55:00.000-08:002007-12-31T20:55:00.000-08:00Oh!Happy New Year! ;-)Oh!<BR/><BR/>Happy New Year! ;-)Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-843897062921901090.post-41669689399761820512007-12-31T20:40:00.000-08:002007-12-31T20:40:00.000-08:00AUGH!Sheeeshhh.And he runs off to hide in the moun...AUGH!<BR/><BR/>Sheeeshhh.<BR/><BR/>And he runs off to hide in the mountains of Mexico and lives happily ever after.<BR/>The end.<BR/><BR/>(I couldn't take it any more...LOLOL)Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.com